You sit in your car seat,
eyes tracing the world outside.
“Bus! Bus!”
Life rushes past,
and we chase after it,
catching moments as they come.
A red light lingers—
stubborn in its waiting.
I press play,
familiar voices fill the space.
You call them out,
“Mama! Amy!”
Our words spill into the air,
ideas tumbling forward,
eager to be known.
Slicing,
writing,
dreaming,
hoping.
Building habits,
growing community—
a rhythm of creation.
As the voices carry on,
you call again,
“Mama! Amy!”
This writing partner of mine,
with her drive,
her fire,
a reflection of the writer I long to be.
You sit in your car seat,
wrapped in words and wonder,
held by the weight of stories.
A new purpose rises,
verses take shape—
writing happens to us.
Thank you!
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Thank you, Shawnda!
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Thank you, Denise! Your words are always so generous and kind. I truly appreciate you!
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Thank you!
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Thanks, Amanda!
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Wow – so many great lines in here – and like Denise, I am struck by how Elena is surrounded by writing, how she is growing in it. You say it, too, “wrapped in words and wonder/ held by the weight of stories.” I can’t wait to hear where you and Amy go!
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so so so beautiful Ana! I love how you honered this new chapter you’ll start with Amy through a poem and through Elena! ❤️
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those early words and phrases make for memorable writing for you and the babes. Enjoy this phase of writing together! Thanks for sharing
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Wow, Ana, and we can see how writing is happening to Elena at the youngest of age. This is so beautiful. Your writing is magical, so you are becoming. “wrapped in words and wonder” is lovely.
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What a delightful perspective! I love the idea of little ones being “wrapped in wonder” by words. That’s exactly what we feel as writers!
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A beautiful poem, showcasing an interest shared.
“Building habits,
growing community—
a rhythm of creation.”
This holds so much meaning.
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Writing does happen to us! I’m so excited for this new adventure with you!
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